“If you’re looking for an honest, thorough edit of your book, Sophie has got you covered.” - Danielle Lauren, Author of The Fates of Aos Duology
"Sophie was absolutely amazing. I knew something wasn’t working in my plot, but I couldn’t identify the issue or how to fix it. Sophie pinpointed exactly what needed work and helped me see which scenes required reworking.
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Thanks to her feedback, I felt confident I was publishing the best possible version of my story. The feedback session was exactly what I needed — a supportive, judgment-free space to talk through the story and problem-solve. I would highly recommend Sophie to anyone looking for a developmental edit." - Helen Worthington-Smith, Author of Skin Deep
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"Sophie’s ability to diagnose plot problems while also offering clear solutions helped me find a new direction for my second novel. She allowed the narrative to shine while maintaining my core vision. I’d highly recommend her services." - Kate Packman, Author of You Can See The End Of The World From Here
What Authors Say
Editorial Packages
I provide different packages to suit, but if you can’t see what you’re looking for, get in touch and we can chat about your requirements.
Every package comes with a free sample edit of two pages (double spaced) so you can get a feel for my editing style and see if we could work together.
Story Starter Assessment -
£150
This package is for authors in the early stages of drafting who need guidance on whether the story set up is working.
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- Review of first 10,000 words
- Editorial letter (this is a report style letter that gives information on the key points with examples)
- Comments on voice, pacing, character setup, plot hook
- Suggestions for strengthening your opening chapters
Manuscript Critique – £400
This is an overview edit of your full manuscript, ideal if you’ve finished the first few drafts and need guidance on the full structure.
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- Read-through of full manuscript (up to 80k words)
- In-depth editorial letter covering:
Structure & pacing
Character arcs
World-building & tone
Plot holes & story logic
- Overarching inline margin comments
- Includes 30-min follow-up call
Full Developmental Edit –
£900
This is for authors wanting a deeper and more collaborative story development.
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Includes:
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- Full manuscript edit (up to 120k words) with extensive inline comments
- In depth and detailed editorial letter covering:
Structure & pacing
Character arcs
World-building & tone
Plot holes & story logic
- Specific scene-by-scene notes and suggestions
- Includes 60-min strategy call
- E-mail support for further questions
About
Hi, I'm Sophie, a freelance developmental editor and writer who is passionate about stories. I have over eight year experience of crafting romance stories and self-publishing, and believe that every story deserves to be told.
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Whether you’re writing commercial romance, spicy fantasy, or contemporary fiction, I specialise in helping indie authors sharpen their plot, deepen their characters, and polish their manuscript so it resonates with readers and stands out in a competitive market.
With a strong background in creative writing, editing, and project management, I bring both analytical insight and big picture thinking to every project.
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​As a seasoned writer, I know what it’s like to be too close to your own work to see the saggy middles, the flat character development, and the exposition in the first chapters. I’ve sat there wondering why my story isn’t working or doubting if it does. My job is to bring clarity to those situations, to give you the confidence to craft the best story you can.
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My credentials:
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Over 8 years of writing and editing experience
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Degree in Creative Writing and English Literature
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Strong understanding of genre fiction, tropes, and reader expectations
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Project delivery experience that keeps your edit smooth, on-schedule, and stress-free
My Editing Philosophy
I believe editing is about collaboration, clarity, and craft. My feedback is honest, thoughtful, and actionable. I’ll help you identify what’s working, what’s getting in the way, and how to make your story fully reflect your vision.
What is developmental editing?
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Editing happens in stages, and the developmental edit comes at the start. It looks at the big picture: your plot, your pacing, your character development, structure and voice. It lays the foundations of your story ready to make it “pretty” at the later stages. I am not a copy/line editor or a proofreader, although I will point out repeated errors if I spot them.